Research 4

Ending

 

In the ending, Anne finally know the truth, in this part, I put some flashback effect here,

 

 

And Anne so grief, she was solo in the street. Actually, the film was finished.

 

But I think this ending is not perfect, because I think almost audience like a happy ending.

So the ending is Anne find her self-confidence.

She is weight loss, she is sport, and she is become beautiful

At the ending of the ending, I refer to the practices at the beginning of the film. The girl is the same girl, but something is different, she find herself, and become a beautiful girl, she knows herself is important, so, all film is finished.

 

 

Research 3

Middle.

 

In the middle of this film, my idea from a movie, it’s “Millionaire slums”.

In that film, it has 2 lines for talk about this story; one line is role’s life, from 8 years old to 25 years old. But that just some part for his life, the second line to connect the first line, it’s very wonderful, so I think my film can use this mod, so in my film line, in the middle, I choose 1 line is Anne imagine Daniel about 4 parts, and the second line is connect that 4 parts. About Anne imagine Daniel, I designed suspense, let audience thought Anne and Daniel are lover, They have experienced four stages of love, there are sweet– Familiar with each other—Quarrel—break up. And in coffee shop, the cat dialogue is connecting those 4 parts.

In coffee shop Anne and Daniel are colleague, Anne love Daniel, but Daniel didn’t know, Daniel has not even noticed Anne, Anne has been a peeper, she just solo in her world, because of her character.

Sweet

Familiar with each other

Quarrel

Break up

And in coffee shop, there is 3 parts for explain or connect the main line.

 

In fact, the dialogue of this film is not good, so I think the dialogue can’t give audience a good explain, so I cut a lot of dialogue form the middle of this film, because the original version is very boring, I hope now it’s better。

Research 2

OPENING

 

In “solo”, about the opening, I want to attract viewers, and I had thinking about some ways, but it’s too hard, because I want show the lonely girl, but it’s not a simple lonely girl. Another way, this lonely girl need a causation for lonely, and In this story, I need tell audience the roles and what style about this story. So, I must say a lot of things with this story. Basically, I imitate the opening of “The Devil Wears Prada”.

I like that film very much, but because copyright, I have to give up that song. I add another free song in my film.

From the beginning to the ending of this opening, I am fully in accordance with the cat dialogue. In this opening, the cat has introduced girl’s character. For example: self-contemptuous, virtuous, lonely, and so on.

So, my camera shots all whit that dialogue, but from the result, I think the opening is too long, because I want show more dramatic conflict for this film, still now, I don’t my choose is good or bad, someone said the opening is wonderful, but someone said this long opening no significance. So I just need audience give me an answer.

 

MORE DETAIL

 

Actually, the line of the opening, I had contrived it. First, I want show people in the face of life

Love

And friend

 

We can see, the first picture , whatever that woman met something, good or bad, But she is brave enough to face life, and second picture, they have a sweet love, the tired picture they also have friends.

 

But let’s look at Anne, this is her life.

And she always lonely, she isn’t has love. And she was always no self-confidence.

And she isn’t has friends.

 

So, through the comparison of the above, let the audience a deeper understanding of Anne’s characters.

Between that comparison, Anna has a solo part. On that time, I want through the cat dialogue, introduction the background of this story and a lot of details, title, who is speaking, Annie’s Information, and so on.

When that finished, I think the audience on a preliminary understanding of Anne.

So the last part of opening, Anne met Daniel, and the story will start.

This is opening whit my idea.

I want in the opening to attract viewers, so I try to do fast-paced opening, and I think some camera shots not beautiful, and the dialogue is also not good, but the actress is very professional, she let my film more wonderful.

research~

Firstly, in my homework. I made three short films. They are simple and modern, sexy girl, and smile in power.
I like my idea in simple and modern, I like that joke in sexy girl, and editing of smile in power has pleased.
In my home work, I find a lot of mistake. For e.g. I think in my short films I need more carefully for camera shots, and more interesting ideas. My short film doesn’t like a story. I need study more knowledge of media. I want make my short film looks like some film master. So I need do more and hard for study.
I did the short film most of the work. And I tried to let the film more fluid. But I do not. It’s really so hard. I would like to make my short film is more or-namental. I think I have to take into audience. I must make my short film for audience was like. It’s really important.
In the future, I want to do some of the longer short film
This is a challenge for me. I would like my short film like a story. I believe I can get it.

Smile in power (home work)

Smile in power (home work)

My creative idea is from live in UK.

When I talk about power, first of all, let me think of an inner power. It’s not so strong, or not so big. It’s just an especial power. This power can make me feel home warm in UK. And feel happy. In fact, this power is smile from people. Today, every person has indifference. A person walks down the street. Sometimes, maybe he will feel lonely. But when he get a smile, a help, it can make he be warm. And this power will be spread. Today, someone help you, but tomorrow, you’ll help some others. It’s a good circle. If this power will be spread forever. So our community will be more harmonious and healthier. This is slogan form china Olympic Games, One world, One dream!

My disadvantage:

In this short film, I have bad control of the scene. Giving rise to a lot of pictures falsehood. The film is not a deep understanding of the language in editing. a lot of obvious mistakes. Story can be better. The important thing is the film not so reality and so objective.

sexy girl In memory(home work)

My creative ideas:
People always thinking a lot of things beyond the expected development from their own ideas, when they get some scenes, styles, images, they will determine the next step of thinking from their memory.
This is the typical way of joke, first of all, do a lot of romance for something, but the result is not normally result. To show the memory of people is very important.
Firstly I make some sexy point of that girl in the movie, including breathing, sweating, and a lot of small motion, but in fact she is just eating noodles. This is a joke, if you smile, and this is my purpose.
Of course, I have a lot of deficiency, for example, in the front the performance is too exaggerated, so the ending is exaggerated too. Maybe some people do not know what I am talking about, and I need to correct it later.
Finally, thank you for your appreciation, thanks to the actress silvia, thanks to partners blanca.

spectacle (homework)

Power memory spectacle

In my opinion, power, memory spectacle are basic factor of movie.

So, for example, power is how to make film, include camera man, director, lighting engineer, film cutter and so on.

Memory is how to save the movie. About tape VCD DVD and so on, by the way, I think this memory like a camera.

Spectacle is a story of movie.

So, I think each film include there three factors

For example,

On the assumption that I’m a cameraman, there is a camera.

So the class and you are spectacle, the camera is memory, and I’m power.

We have formed whole movie maker team.

Power memory spectacle

In my opinion, power, memory spectacle are basic factor of movie.

So, for example, power is how to make film, include camera man, director, lighting engineer, film cutter and so on.

Memory is how to save the movie. About tape VCD DVD and so on, by the way, I think this memory like a camera.

Spectacle is a story of movie.

So, I think each film include there three factors

For example,

On the assumption that I’m a cameraman, there is a camera.

So the class and you are spectacle, the camera is memory, and I’m power.

We have formed whole movie maker team.

 

 

The Five Obstructions.

               The Five Obstructions.

 

The first obstruction is the 12 frames.

The Director’s countermeasure is Cuban.

 

Because:

 

12 frames = flutter

Cuba = samba = flutter

 

So:

12 frames = Cuba

 

Director grasped the inbeing of flutter, and understands that means.
Director used some simple action, words, talk about the perfect man’s exhibition for a women.
The Director is successful.
Camera shots Like dancing, film like dancing,  but the  perfect man is soul of this film.
The 12 frames is not an obstruction.

However,

The 12 frames are really important of this film.

Cuba is best answer of all.